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Teal and cream,
swinging to the swallows swoop.
spotted rainbow friend.

Riffles woosh then glide,
from snowmelt,
              rolls then boils.
In my hand,
             she,
                  spring bright.

http://tonysalpenglow.blogspot.com/2012/05/yuba-ku-5-13-2012.html



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Sounds like a nice day out. Didn't do a whole lot of wading with those flows I'd imagine?

And remember. Haikus are 5/7/5 syllable counts :P


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